REVISED SCENES

Aspiring athletes will often mimic the workouts of their idols and influences.  Aspiring chefs will try to add their own twist to an existing recipe.  I like to perform a similar exercise as a writer and re-write movie scenes.  The practice is to add a different "flavor" to the dialogue and action within the scene.  However, the scene must start and end in the same place (...ergo, no changes are made to the overall plot of the story).   

Below are some scenes from the third cinematic episode (...the one where the SITH get REVENGE) that I originally re-wrote in 2014.  Please note, these scenes were not re-written because I disliked the film.  I am not, by any means, a prequel basher.  Again, this was an exercise in writing  scenes with alternate dialogue... and I had a lot of fun with it!


Revised Scene 1: Chancellor Palpatine Returns to the Senate / Anakin and Padmé Reunite

Revised Scene 2: Anakin and Padmé at Home (aka The Balcony Scene)

Revised Scene 3: Yoda Escapes Kashyyyk

Revised Scene 4: Obi-Wan and Yoda Return to the Jedi Temple